Grey skin, red eyes
eyes that see all
all color drained
drained from your soul
when you hurt her
her of black skin
skin shining warm
warm morning sun
her smile died then
then she knew why
why you killed it
it gave her will
you’ll never know
know your dear son
son of beauty
beauty despite
he’ll never know
know his father
father rapist
rapist monster
gone away now
now worlds away
away from black
black is her color
she watches him
him bright morning
morning he plays
plays, says, “Momma!”
the sun is warm
warm on their skin
skin raises up
up in their smiles
Loop poetry: There is no restrictions on the number of stanzas nor on the Syllable count for each line. In each stanza, the last word of first line becomes the first word to line 2, last word of line 2 becomes the first word to line 3,and last word of line 3 becomes the first word to line 4. This is followed to each stanza.
I’m promoting you to think of what comes to your mind when you picture BLACK🖤. Think of what it means to you and or what it’s stand for. My loop stopped to SMILES… Hope you continue it following loop poetry down in my comment box!
Thank you for reading!
Noorien Misbha! 🔝❤💯🥀
Smiles are easy
So it does
Faking picture
Of a raped for soul
It stood so far,
That society
Didn’t know
We were all aware of that passing soul
Suddenly she passed
Smoothly and Firmly
Family stood quite
Within lying a crying soul
No judgment was passed
No one judged
Just it was as quite
As Quite she was before……
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👏👏🤝Well Thank you Prakhar!… It’s really quite good to read it😊! It’s fine u didn’t follow a loop poetry rule.. Bt it’s awesome 🖤💯💫
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Sup👌👌
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Thank you !
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This is overwhelming 👍
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Thank you love😊❤💯🥀
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This one is my favorite 😍👌
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Glad you liked it… Why don’t you try to continue a loop poetry starting from a word SMILE! 🙂🖤🥀
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Smiles brings peace
Peace among one another
Another being understanding
Understanding the true meaning of life
(I tried 😅)
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Well tried shaboo… It’s pretty good 😊🖤🥀
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will try this form too someday
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Thank you… As u wish🙂💫
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Thank you❤✨
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